Tuesday 8 March 2016

1st Draft of Script | Feedback Wanted | Work In Progress | Fantastic Voyage

This is my script so far. I'm still working on the second half but it would be great to get some feedback for my work so far. If someone could check I have my cells the right way around too that would be great. I'm still a little bit confused on the science behind this but think I'm beginning to understand it now.

1st Draft

Sign how the body fights infection

Red backdrop 
X2 blood flow cam belts pop up

Sign this is the blood...
it's healthy at the moment 

B Cells
1 to pop up centre stage
Big flashing arrow to drop from top

Sign this is a B cell
it has 2 jobs

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Remove front parts from stage
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Warden tower to move in --> 

Sign one job is to keep an eye out for suspicious activity

Spot lights scan area. 

Infection
1 to pop up centre stage
Big flashing arrow to drop from top

Sign this is an infection 

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Remove front parts from stage
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Sign when it joins the blood stream, the 'wardens' raise the alarm!

Red alarms drop from ceiling flashing
SFX sirens

Sign then they attack 

Warden tower moves off stage <--
SFX "charge!"

Swarm of B cells moves in -->

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Set moves left
New set moves in (to represent magnification 
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B cells and infection clash
B cells enter from left and infection from right.
SFX battle sounds
Sign sometimes they need back up

Poster unfurls from top (wanted poster)

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Remove parts
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T Cells
1 to pop up centre stage
Big flashing arrow to drop from top

Sign this is a T cell

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Remove front parts from stage
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Sign they're here to join in with the fight
Sign a lot of effort goes in to fighting the infection
Sign this can be why we feel drained 


T cells move on from left and join the battle 

1 comment:

  1. Hey Beckie - this looks like a lot of fun - I suggest you email Peter at p.klappa@kent.ac.uk and ask him to take a look at your info for accuracy - send him the url to this post :)

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