Feedback please | Test Pre-viz | From Script to Screen

While working on computerizing my storyboard, I thought I should test it out in terms of a pre-viz incase I need to add in some extra shots or even remove some to make it flow. This was made using the original pencil storyboard.

If anyone has any feedback on the shots used or the timing, it would be much appreciated.

Animatic | Arthur Christmas | From Script to Screen

This is the animatic made from the storyboard of Arthur Christmas. The timing is slightly off in some parts but this is due to the timings on Premiere Pro. Every time I add a half second to the end of it it changes it immediately. (Example 00:00:03:50 to about 00:00:07:00 for no reason at all)
If someone could help me remedy this I'd love to go back and edit this further. Maybe add in a few more images to break up the longer chunks and reflect the on screen action further.